J@ck
01-07-2000, 00:23
Alright, Greap ?
A few points, on a well written (tidier HTML than mine anyway!) website.
- Watch the red text on a black background, it can be hard to read. Also there's a typo on "Poweups". I'm no dictionary, but it might be wise to run a site through a spell checker, prior to up-loading.
- Without knowing the background, I would recommend you try and avoid confrontational material. Your feelings on an individual, should really remain with yourself. I once got an e-mail full of abuse from the states, saying how my site had nothing to do with baking! - Just ignore it.
- This is probably just my own naivity but, I didn't quite know what the site was about, until I clicked a few links. May be give a brief outline of the game on the startpage.
- Finally, you might like to make the main 'BadgerDrive' logo a link that takes you back to the startpage, as I couldn't see one which meant I had to click on my back button a few times to get back to the point of origin.
Jack sticks his twopenneth in, yet again! ;)
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"If they built the 'London Eye' in Tokyo, would it be called the 'Japs Eye'?
For a half-baked approach to Half-Life.
www.halfbaked.clara.net (http://www.halfbaked.clara.net)
A few points, on a well written (tidier HTML than mine anyway!) website.
- Watch the red text on a black background, it can be hard to read. Also there's a typo on "Poweups". I'm no dictionary, but it might be wise to run a site through a spell checker, prior to up-loading.
- Without knowing the background, I would recommend you try and avoid confrontational material. Your feelings on an individual, should really remain with yourself. I once got an e-mail full of abuse from the states, saying how my site had nothing to do with baking! - Just ignore it.
- This is probably just my own naivity but, I didn't quite know what the site was about, until I clicked a few links. May be give a brief outline of the game on the startpage.
- Finally, you might like to make the main 'BadgerDrive' logo a link that takes you back to the startpage, as I couldn't see one which meant I had to click on my back button a few times to get back to the point of origin.
Jack sticks his twopenneth in, yet again! ;)
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"If they built the 'London Eye' in Tokyo, would it be called the 'Japs Eye'?
For a half-baked approach to Half-Life.
www.halfbaked.clara.net (http://www.halfbaked.clara.net)