Cruel Sea.

[RoadHawK]

Short and sour.


Crimson tides a sickening site,
Yet, no evading the harpoons strike.
Fueled by avarice, greed and lust,
the fear instilled by the killing thrust.

[[TSQN] Fu11]

i don't really know how to reply to this?

breathtaking, and like you say, short and sour.

a single hit, that could never miss. bullet like.

bleeding, i like it.

:)

[Mori]

I like it, too... this will have an impact on those with even the shortest attention span. I often wonder why my poems end up so long when I so often prefer to read shorter works...