14th sept

[Nerfie]

The clocks ticking,
faster or slower?
you cannot notice
as your heart beats faster.

Say it not now
say its not so
say it not today
because I love you today

The clocks ticking,
thats it, its finshed
its all gone,

it last for ever
well, for you it does,
for the others it doesnt

what started on the 14th of febuary that is
will end some day for someone.
but not me,
for me the clock ticks
past september the 14th and
then december 14th.

Spring is here?
oh joy?
The feelings still here?
but wait its not!
the clock has stoped,
and your free to think

But think carefully
and think wise
like a long train pully
to find ways into life

start again with a new fresh feeling
and hope this time,
You will never need the clock to stop
ticking.

[Hellraisermk2]

:) me likes it.... sweet

<just corrected a spelling mistake :) - Fu11>

[Edited by [TSQN] Fu11 on 27-10-2000 at 02:49 AM]

[[TSQN] Fu11]

hmmm, now this, I have conflicting emotions about.

I think i understand the intention, and certain lines just hit and stick with me..


because i love you today


reminds me of one of my writings, the clock ticking analogy, such long times, can seem so short, and vice versa, tick tock, tick tock, and another year is gone.

december was an awfully cold month for me too last year, i can relate.