neo hippy
07-06-2001, 17:32
my last two haven't been all that great at all, i'd go as far as to say bad. the last i didn't post on here because it was THAT bad. so its third time lucky i guess, but i still dont like it:
take my blood
and bleed me dry
i need to escape
my endless high
feed me with pure
replacing my needs
give me a chance
see where it leads
once i am empty
fill me with you
clear my mind
patch me up new
shine me a light
making me strong
love me always
forever long
con amor siempre
it will be shared
you'll never regret
that day you cared
i really dont like the last bit, just doesnt seem to fit. any comments very gratefully receved :)
take my blood
and bleed me dry
i need to escape
my endless high
feed me with pure
replacing my needs
give me a chance
see where it leads
once i am empty
fill me with you
clear my mind
patch me up new
shine me a light
making me strong
love me always
forever long
con amor siempre
it will be shared
you'll never regret
that day you cared
i really dont like the last bit, just doesnt seem to fit. any comments very gratefully receved :)