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travis bickle
12-06-2001, 00:18
bed of nails
i need to sleep
your pain keeps me awake

why does your pain offer me comfort?
my only companion in here
disorientated

im trapped
in a room without walls
but visually restrictive boundaries

do i stand and fall as my body is exhausted
or do i lie down slowly
and take the pain

broken and tired
i close my eyes and jump
face first onto the bed of nails

my lover

Karen
12-06-2001, 00:48
Well done Trav, where'd you steal that from? :P

only joshing, thats really good, really deap. I had no idea you could write like that.

enekron
13-06-2001, 11:00
This stuff is scareee... :{

travis bickle
15-06-2001, 00:43
sorry if you found it that way - it is not intentional