errr......... stuff

[travis bickle]

sigh
the exhalation of sadness
the exorcism of negativity
stomach, chest and throat
hold the demons in
i sigh

spatially overwhelmed
i sit and look
focused but not aware
alive but dead

i sigh it all away

[da Cyborg]

i sigh.... but it remains

[travis bickle]

that actually works a lot better than my last line

i definitely get a short release from sighs but as you implied it doent go away properly

[da Cyborg]

well, thank you, it was a good poem in the first place anyway i thought :)

[Joga]

ah i like that very much Travis...i can link to them feelings...as you well know :|

[travis bickle]

that is good as it must have some truth and i maybe have expressed myself well :)

its also good to see people commenting on stuff for a change......