first sunrise

[Jp]

Sitting here listening,
To an old album track,
Memories of a forgotten time,
come swirling back.

An age of innocence and dreams,
Of excitement and fears,
The first kiss of a lover,
The first sting of real tears.

Neverending summers,
Football in the park,
Electricity in the nightclubs,
Awkward fummbles in the dark.

Time trickled slowly by,
A day seemed like a week,
My heart was still untarnished,
Experiences yet to seek.

Would I go back?
Memory erased, thats for sure,
To look through these tired eyes of mine,
And see my first sunrise once more.

[blito]

nice :)

[Chun the Unavoidable]

Ahy ugree.

[Mr_Poo_Poo]

When I read 'rise' in the title, I thought you meant -- you know.

How embarrassing? I hope no-one reads this and cottons-on.

[llwyth]

would I go back, bloody right I would :)

cool poem.

Ven

[Jp]

Thanks for the comments all:cheese:

Mr poo I worry about you!!:laugh: