Perren_Shrenymir
24-07-2007, 18:36
I pen this journal in the form of a narrative. A tale..., a speculation! It is so written as to be read around winter's campfires, on the darkest of nights...
It is apt to be a little tall in the telling. As for its length, well, please accept this humble narrators most abject apologies!
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Expedition to The Downs
The two sat atop an incline in the plain, camping above the nighted tomb-entrance.
They had set a small fire to ward darkness and cold; darkness that weighed down with malevolent presence, and cold which seemed to emanate from the low gathered luminous mist that forever seemed to cling to this plain with not sign of lifting. It eddied, swirling particularly thickly by the ancient stone lintel doorway which led to the utter darkness festering at the heart of the hill.
Their gutting fire was well tended and fuelled, but they had to bound it with small rocks to retain both flame and heat. These rocks, piled in a rough circle, were little more than broken debris, chippings of the greater stones that they had found rooted in the scrub atop the mound. They did not want to think about the purpose of the cairn stones from which they had carefully removed the smaller rocks. The living had more claim on these stones now than the dead. There also, in the Tor's shadow, they had struck a tent to rest. Although sleep would have been welcome after their hard days labouring, and despite the late hour, still they sat about the campfire, guarded, tense and watchful with no comfort gained from the small spluttering flames. For this was no ordinary plain on which they ventured, no ordinary time or place that they had chosen for uncomfortable respite!
The man was grim faced and resolute in the darkness, cloaked and crouching with sword unsheathed, it lay by his side, while naught but the firelight illuminated his set features. Ever he watched the valley below, clenched fist checked and keen eye darting from boulder to mound to plain, scouring every shadow for traces and signs. The woman had stood now, stretching and walking apart from the camp, she straightening her garb and held her meagre light aloft. She was a sentinel. A single point of light, rigid and unmoving, she stood atop the small declivity that they had chosen for its defence, spluttering torch casting flame and smoke over the mound, casting weird shadows which writhed in the mist. Both carried the trappings of adventuring, both watched warily waiting for a dawn long in coming.
The man stood suddenly, alerted by the sudden tensing of his companion's stance. He quickly grasped and levelled his weapon, ready for whatever was to come. She had seen…, something. Quickly looking over her shoulder to him, she motioned, pointing a shaking hand to he small valley below, just one mist filled depression between the many mounds that populated the Downs. He slowly drew nearer to her, swinging a well practiced shield to his arm. He could see now that something was approaching the camp from below. It came nearer, stumbling and lurching through the darkness as sickly-green mist swirled about its naked feet...
To their eyes the fumbling stranger in the mist below seemed like a small child. Lost and weary, the child blinked in the revealed torchlight and now stood motionless at the base of the mound, looking up. It appeared not to notice them at all, but seemed more to be staring at the flame which the woman held in her hand, he was a lost bruised moth, looking with broken hope towards a maiden’s candle. She gasped, not trusting what she was seeing, expecting yet another attack from the evil that haunted the Barrows of Tyrn Gorthad. Her first thought was that this was some lure to make her abandon the advantage of height, camp and companion, and approach the valley floor. Standing still, looking down at the apparition, she was finally able to pick out the features of a grime-streaked and anguished face. Why, this was not a child at all, though he was young! She saw that it was the face of one of the Shire-folk: A hobbit lad, lost and wandering. His vacant, red-rimmed unseeing eyes were framed by the ghastly pall of his visage, his clothing grime-etched and dirty. She could see livid bruises about his arms, legs and face. He seemed to be completely oblivious to all, softly sobbing to himself, tears riling down an angry clenched face.
She saw him and felt pity. A wretched creature lost and tortured. Gently, she called to the hobbit.
“Ho there, Shire-born! If a Shire-born lad you be and not some phantom! Are you lost? What is your business here on the Barrow Downs?”
The hobbit seemed to flinch at even these softly spoken words, as If he had not heard kindness spoken to him in a hundred years. His tear-filled eyes snapped into focus, and he wiped his face as he looked up to the woman, then to her grim companion. As if speaking for the first time in a lifetime he cried out with rasping, strained voice.
“Be you spectre or Fay, my lady? For you stand upon an evil mound, this is an evil place and I am lost and without hope.”
“Why little one, would spirits of the Barrow Downs have need of these torches?” she called to him smiling and beckoning, “we are simple travellers such as you. We will hold our bows and you shall come up. You look bruised and lost, so you shall warm yourself by our fire.”
The man relaxed a little, sheathing his sword and placing his shield next to the tent, then withdrawing to the fireside to prepare for their unusual and unexpected guest, as the hobbit climbed the mound with some difficulty, and approached the camp and its warm safety.
“I have climbed to your camp,” the hobbit said sitting him by the fire. With a sudden clarity and resolve he spoke again. “I have a tale to tell…, if you would hear it.”
The companions seated themselves by the unusual hobbit, who had settled by the fire. While its low flame cast shadows upon all of their faces, turning them oft’times to grotesque masks, they noticed that the hobbit’s sobs had quietened somewhat, and he stared to the embers of the fire as if he had stared too long at it’s glowings and they had captured his gaze as if to mesmerised him.
After a time and an awkward silence, the man cleared his throat to speak.
“I am Feredir, and this is my companion in arms Canendula. Who are you? Do you know where you are? Are you lost?”
The hobbit smiled grimly to Canendula. He answered between gasps and sobs, and yet, responded in an unusual cryptic fashion.
“I know…(sob) exactly… where I am, but…(sob) I am… lost all the same!”
Canendula smiled with pity, seeing the hobbits pain, and spoke softly to him. “What has happened to you, little one?”
The hobbit, now gathered his thoughts, catching his gaze back from the fire’s base, and frowning, began to relate a sad tale.
“My name is Perren Shrenymire and I hail from Archet; a place of warmth, light and fellowship. I was venturing on the downs with my cousin Rosie, at the behest of Captain Bence of the Dunedain. We were to find the source of the evil that haunts this plain, if it were possible, and report back to his camp, so he had hired our services. He thought that as we had local lore we would make good scouts, and he could not spare the men. Oh, my Rosie! A more innocent and beautiful lass you could not care to meet!”
“Present company excluded of course,” Feredir added with a faint smile. “Where is this Rosie of whom you speak?”
“Far from here, Sir, is where she now abides. She is far from the harms of this cursed spot!”
The hobbit began to cry anew, tears streaked his face with the remembered pains of his past trials.
“Rosie and I were exploring a nearby tomb. The tomb of Elythion. The door had already been opened and we felt that it was an easy essay in scouting the land and finding the information that Bence and his Ranger-folk needed. Ah, but tragedy! The door had been left open by greatest guile and evilest intent, and Rosie and I had entered a vast web. Like flies we were, caught in those fearful, dust choked corridors, where the earth presses down on flesh and bone alike as if to grind the will and crush the spirit. Cornered and ambushed, we were, by the most fearsome of phantoms. They were dressed in black shrouds, evil wights, with a touch from a bony hand that freezes the skin and numbs the soul! I screamed as my Rosie fell under their pressing attacks. Madness must have consumed me! If she was slain, what cared I for my life! My dagger, ancient and imbued with the craft of those men of the Westernesse, bit home again and again, until the evil about me dissipated and receded. But too late! My poor Rosie!”
TO BE CONTINUED!
It is apt to be a little tall in the telling. As for its length, well, please accept this humble narrators most abject apologies!
************************************
Expedition to The Downs
The two sat atop an incline in the plain, camping above the nighted tomb-entrance.
They had set a small fire to ward darkness and cold; darkness that weighed down with malevolent presence, and cold which seemed to emanate from the low gathered luminous mist that forever seemed to cling to this plain with not sign of lifting. It eddied, swirling particularly thickly by the ancient stone lintel doorway which led to the utter darkness festering at the heart of the hill.
Their gutting fire was well tended and fuelled, but they had to bound it with small rocks to retain both flame and heat. These rocks, piled in a rough circle, were little more than broken debris, chippings of the greater stones that they had found rooted in the scrub atop the mound. They did not want to think about the purpose of the cairn stones from which they had carefully removed the smaller rocks. The living had more claim on these stones now than the dead. There also, in the Tor's shadow, they had struck a tent to rest. Although sleep would have been welcome after their hard days labouring, and despite the late hour, still they sat about the campfire, guarded, tense and watchful with no comfort gained from the small spluttering flames. For this was no ordinary plain on which they ventured, no ordinary time or place that they had chosen for uncomfortable respite!
The man was grim faced and resolute in the darkness, cloaked and crouching with sword unsheathed, it lay by his side, while naught but the firelight illuminated his set features. Ever he watched the valley below, clenched fist checked and keen eye darting from boulder to mound to plain, scouring every shadow for traces and signs. The woman had stood now, stretching and walking apart from the camp, she straightening her garb and held her meagre light aloft. She was a sentinel. A single point of light, rigid and unmoving, she stood atop the small declivity that they had chosen for its defence, spluttering torch casting flame and smoke over the mound, casting weird shadows which writhed in the mist. Both carried the trappings of adventuring, both watched warily waiting for a dawn long in coming.
The man stood suddenly, alerted by the sudden tensing of his companion's stance. He quickly grasped and levelled his weapon, ready for whatever was to come. She had seen…, something. Quickly looking over her shoulder to him, she motioned, pointing a shaking hand to he small valley below, just one mist filled depression between the many mounds that populated the Downs. He slowly drew nearer to her, swinging a well practiced shield to his arm. He could see now that something was approaching the camp from below. It came nearer, stumbling and lurching through the darkness as sickly-green mist swirled about its naked feet...
To their eyes the fumbling stranger in the mist below seemed like a small child. Lost and weary, the child blinked in the revealed torchlight and now stood motionless at the base of the mound, looking up. It appeared not to notice them at all, but seemed more to be staring at the flame which the woman held in her hand, he was a lost bruised moth, looking with broken hope towards a maiden’s candle. She gasped, not trusting what she was seeing, expecting yet another attack from the evil that haunted the Barrows of Tyrn Gorthad. Her first thought was that this was some lure to make her abandon the advantage of height, camp and companion, and approach the valley floor. Standing still, looking down at the apparition, she was finally able to pick out the features of a grime-streaked and anguished face. Why, this was not a child at all, though he was young! She saw that it was the face of one of the Shire-folk: A hobbit lad, lost and wandering. His vacant, red-rimmed unseeing eyes were framed by the ghastly pall of his visage, his clothing grime-etched and dirty. She could see livid bruises about his arms, legs and face. He seemed to be completely oblivious to all, softly sobbing to himself, tears riling down an angry clenched face.
She saw him and felt pity. A wretched creature lost and tortured. Gently, she called to the hobbit.
“Ho there, Shire-born! If a Shire-born lad you be and not some phantom! Are you lost? What is your business here on the Barrow Downs?”
The hobbit seemed to flinch at even these softly spoken words, as If he had not heard kindness spoken to him in a hundred years. His tear-filled eyes snapped into focus, and he wiped his face as he looked up to the woman, then to her grim companion. As if speaking for the first time in a lifetime he cried out with rasping, strained voice.
“Be you spectre or Fay, my lady? For you stand upon an evil mound, this is an evil place and I am lost and without hope.”
“Why little one, would spirits of the Barrow Downs have need of these torches?” she called to him smiling and beckoning, “we are simple travellers such as you. We will hold our bows and you shall come up. You look bruised and lost, so you shall warm yourself by our fire.”
The man relaxed a little, sheathing his sword and placing his shield next to the tent, then withdrawing to the fireside to prepare for their unusual and unexpected guest, as the hobbit climbed the mound with some difficulty, and approached the camp and its warm safety.
“I have climbed to your camp,” the hobbit said sitting him by the fire. With a sudden clarity and resolve he spoke again. “I have a tale to tell…, if you would hear it.”
The companions seated themselves by the unusual hobbit, who had settled by the fire. While its low flame cast shadows upon all of their faces, turning them oft’times to grotesque masks, they noticed that the hobbit’s sobs had quietened somewhat, and he stared to the embers of the fire as if he had stared too long at it’s glowings and they had captured his gaze as if to mesmerised him.
After a time and an awkward silence, the man cleared his throat to speak.
“I am Feredir, and this is my companion in arms Canendula. Who are you? Do you know where you are? Are you lost?”
The hobbit smiled grimly to Canendula. He answered between gasps and sobs, and yet, responded in an unusual cryptic fashion.
“I know…(sob) exactly… where I am, but…(sob) I am… lost all the same!”
Canendula smiled with pity, seeing the hobbits pain, and spoke softly to him. “What has happened to you, little one?”
The hobbit, now gathered his thoughts, catching his gaze back from the fire’s base, and frowning, began to relate a sad tale.
“My name is Perren Shrenymire and I hail from Archet; a place of warmth, light and fellowship. I was venturing on the downs with my cousin Rosie, at the behest of Captain Bence of the Dunedain. We were to find the source of the evil that haunts this plain, if it were possible, and report back to his camp, so he had hired our services. He thought that as we had local lore we would make good scouts, and he could not spare the men. Oh, my Rosie! A more innocent and beautiful lass you could not care to meet!”
“Present company excluded of course,” Feredir added with a faint smile. “Where is this Rosie of whom you speak?”
“Far from here, Sir, is where she now abides. She is far from the harms of this cursed spot!”
The hobbit began to cry anew, tears streaked his face with the remembered pains of his past trials.
“Rosie and I were exploring a nearby tomb. The tomb of Elythion. The door had already been opened and we felt that it was an easy essay in scouting the land and finding the information that Bence and his Ranger-folk needed. Ah, but tragedy! The door had been left open by greatest guile and evilest intent, and Rosie and I had entered a vast web. Like flies we were, caught in those fearful, dust choked corridors, where the earth presses down on flesh and bone alike as if to grind the will and crush the spirit. Cornered and ambushed, we were, by the most fearsome of phantoms. They were dressed in black shrouds, evil wights, with a touch from a bony hand that freezes the skin and numbs the soul! I screamed as my Rosie fell under their pressing attacks. Madness must have consumed me! If she was slain, what cared I for my life! My dagger, ancient and imbued with the craft of those men of the Westernesse, bit home again and again, until the evil about me dissipated and receded. But too late! My poor Rosie!”
TO BE CONTINUED!